Abigail
Escape from Alcatraz
No one has ever escaped from Alcatraz. Alcatraz is the best prison in the world. On exactly 9:30 on the night of June 11, 1962, four 30 year old men tried to escape Alcatraz. They got through the steel walls with nail clippers and spoons they stole from the cafeteria because the walls were always damp and crumbled easily. They made everyone think they liked to be artistic, so they ordered paint and cardboard and paint brushes to cover up the man-sized holes they made. One prisoner’s hole had a metal bar through it, so he could not get out. Only three convicts escaped.
Here is the evidence that they did not get to land. There are shark infested waters, so they could’ve gotten eaten. There are currents that could pull you out to sea. The water is very cold, so they could’ve gotten hypothermia. They have not been seen since they escaped. Therefore, they could be alive or dead. Also, a body was seen a month after the escape, about fifteen miles out, past the Golden Gate Bridge, and it was wearing prison clothes. Thirty-six men tried to escape including the three men in 1962. Twenty-three were caught, seven killed, one drowned, two attempted but officials believe that they got swept out to sea. There are only three prisoners left: Frank Morris, John Anglin, and Clarence Anglin. As shown, it is unlikely they got to land.
Here is the evidence that they could’ve gotten to land. A car was stolen that night, and they could have stolen the car. They have not been seen since they escaped. Therefore, they could be alive or dead. In conclusion, I think only one criminal got to land, and the other two died in one of those conditions. I recommend you close the case, because they are old and prove no threat.
Here is the evidence that they did not get to land. There are shark infested waters, so they could’ve gotten eaten. There are currents that could pull you out to sea. The water is very cold, so they could’ve gotten hypothermia. They have not been seen since they escaped. Therefore, they could be alive or dead. Also, a body was seen a month after the escape, about fifteen miles out, past the Golden Gate Bridge, and it was wearing prison clothes. Thirty-six men tried to escape including the three men in 1962. Twenty-three were caught, seven killed, one drowned, two attempted but officials believe that they got swept out to sea. There are only three prisoners left: Frank Morris, John Anglin, and Clarence Anglin. As shown, it is unlikely they got to land.
Here is the evidence that they could’ve gotten to land. A car was stolen that night, and they could have stolen the car. They have not been seen since they escaped. Therefore, they could be alive or dead. In conclusion, I think only one criminal got to land, and the other two died in one of those conditions. I recommend you close the case, because they are old and prove no threat.
California Screamin'
“I can’t wait to go!” I said to my family. “Quick! We can’t waste any time!
“Calm down. There is a huge line so we have to wait,”
“I want to go now!!! It looks scary, but fun! Is it fun Ben? I want to know I’m going to have a great time,”
“Oh, it is awesome! You go like 100 miles per hour!’’
Once California Screaming started, I screamed so loud! I screamed like this: “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
The loop felt like it never happened.
“Disneyland is great!!!”
“Calm down. There is a huge line so we have to wait,”
“I want to go now!!! It looks scary, but fun! Is it fun Ben? I want to know I’m going to have a great time,”
“Oh, it is awesome! You go like 100 miles per hour!’’
Once California Screaming started, I screamed so loud! I screamed like this: “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”
The loop felt like it never happened.
“Disneyland is great!!!”
Ava the Apple
Ava struck the helpless teenage man again and again. The person could not get out. The blood trickled down the person’s face. They screamed a high-pitched scream. The person was dead.
Once there was an apple named Ava. Her owner was very nice and taught her to roll and jump. Her owner gave her googley eyes and princess clothes. Ava got abandoned by her owner because she forgot to take her back from a hotel in Florida. So Ava got mad. The apple roamed the Florida Mall waiting for her first victim. So then Ava saw a person throw a perfectly good red and yellow apple in the trash. Ava went up to the person and bit him on the leg. The person fell down and Ava struck again. But this time in the face.
Ava struck the helpless teenage man again and again. The person could not get out. The blood trickled down the person’s face. They screamed a high-pitched scream. The person was dead.
Once there was an apple named Ava. Her owner was very nice and taught her to roll and jump. Her owner gave her googley eyes and princess clothes. Ava got abandoned by her owner because she forgot to take her back from a hotel in Florida. So Ava got mad. The apple roamed the Florida Mall waiting for her first victim. So then Ava saw a person throw a perfectly good red and yellow apple in the trash. Ava went up to the person and bit him on the leg. The person fell down and Ava struck again. But this time in the face.
Ava struck the helpless teenage man again and again. The person could not get out. The blood trickled down the person’s face. They screamed a high-pitched scream. The person was dead.
Zombie Hideout
One day I was walking to school, like any other day. But I saw a staircase, then a door I hadn’t seen before. I walked down the steep, wooden, staircase, and through the door. I looked around. There were people lying down. They looked gross, ugly. Then I realized they were… ZOMBIES!!! There was also a sign that said: “Zombies When we decide the zombie apocalypse should come.” So then the door slammed shut. I guess it woke them up because I heard grunting and groaning. Then I got in a can about as big as I, with an eye hole. The zombies opened the door and got out into the world. I was trying to decide to go home and tell my family or stay in here. I decided to go home. So I slyly and quietly stood against the fences and got home. My dad asked: “Why aren’t you at school, Steve?”
I said: There are zombies outside!!
“Let me see,” my dad said “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Everyone get to the panic house!” The panic house is like our regular house, but under our house. Same exact food, clothes, and rooms. We went in and stayed there. The clock read: 11: 57. We were eating lunch when we heard a crash. The zombies came into the panic house. My mom got eaten, then my dad. I just stopped running and let the zombies eat me...
I said: There are zombies outside!!
“Let me see,” my dad said “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! Everyone get to the panic house!” The panic house is like our regular house, but under our house. Same exact food, clothes, and rooms. We went in and stayed there. The clock read: 11: 57. We were eating lunch when we heard a crash. The zombies came into the panic house. My mom got eaten, then my dad. I just stopped running and let the zombies eat me...